Friday Drabble: Waiting

drabble is a very short story of exactly 100 words. Feel free to join in and write your own drabbles on Fridays and tag them with “friday drabble” and on Twitter with the hashtag #fridaydrabble.

This one goes out to all the fathers of daughters out there.


They’d come for her about an hour ago. Opening the door, they’d spilled in like a wave. They were hyperkinetic with unfamiliar excitement, poorly masking the anxieties of the evening’s indefinite expectations.

Their costumes attempted to balance the provocative and the parentally-acceptable with varying success – looking more like kids playing at adults for the effort. His daughter’s face was flushed and her high cheekbones red – though with rouge or adrenaline, he couldn’t quite tell.

They left like an evacuation with over-the-shoulder promises to be home by the appointed hour.

“Don’t worry, dad,” she said. Her first school dance.

He waits.


10 thoughts on “Friday Drabble: Waiting

  1. Such a great twist. I LOVE this!
    I write Friday Flash Fiction too! You are welcome to leave a link in my comment section of my flash…Jeez that reminds me. I better write one for tomorrow!
    Came from Blogdramedy’s place!

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