Thanks for coming back to this year’s BlogFestivus writing challenge. Nine stories that are supposed to take inspiration from the nine reindeer on Santa’s sleigh. Today is Day Two – Dancer.
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The following evening, Holly and Nick were scribbling out Christmas cards when she noticed movement in the front yard.
“Nick! It’s HER!” she said, leaping up from her chair, Christmas letter copies fluttering to the floor. The woman was holding a chain of beads extended before her like an offering and swaying back and forth on their grass.
Nick furrowed his brow, “What’s she doing? Some sort of tai-chi?”
Holly was out the door and into the front yard. The woman was wrapped in a striped blanket and mumbling something that Holly couldn’t make out as she moved back and forth. Holly shivered, the hair on her arms standing up from more than the cold.
What the —
She started as Nick moved past her, stopping between her and the woman, who seemed oblivious to him.
“Ma’am… Are you okay?”
She paused for a moment and slurred, “A reindeer,” and returned to her beads and rhythms.
Crap. She’s drunk. Or crazy. We don’t even have any friggin’ reindeer.
A man trotted towards them. Tall with dark, ponytailed hair and an expensive-looking cashmere coat. He stopped and grabbed the old woman, though it wasn’t clear whether in anger or relief.
He turned to the bewildered couple, “I’m sorry about my mother. She gets this way around Christmastime.” He then said something to her in a language Holly didn’t understand and started to usher her away from the house.
“I’m afraid it’s getting worse,” he said.
I like how the word “reindeer” is shaping up. It must mean something.
Stay tuned!
He “trotted” towards her. I’m paying attention, Steve. This sure is fun.
Now I’m terrified I won’t be able to bring it all home!
I sense a dramatic reveal at the end of the nine days. My elf toes are curling in anticipation.
…or a giant cliffhanger! Or more likely, something much less interesting… ;)
Now, who are the woman and cashmere swathed man? Hhm, very intriguing. :)
I always hated serials for making me wait. At least it’s only one day… :)
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I love the drama and the build up of your story. You’ve made denouement your bitch
MrMary — gracias! I’m happy with the start — now I need to pull it off!
I like how you’re interpreting the challenge. I considered doing something similar, but wimped out and went the more obvious route.
Random — thanks! The basic idea came to me on a dogwalk one morning. So if it turns out poorly, blame Penny.
Oh no. I suspect that things are just getting started for poor Holly and Nick. I know how these gypsy curses work. :)
Closer to Poltergeist than Thinner, if you get my drift… ;)
Oh, I *like* where this is going!
Thanks SS!
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I prefer my Santas like I prefer my men: drunk and jolly. Hopefully, this’ll pan out.
MT — I think it’s a long way til someone gets to chill out with a drink… ;)
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